Nepali Gazal, kabita(नेपाली साहित्य, कबिता र गजल)

This is a Nepali गजल written by ANJAN BIBASH ACLO. I do not know him but He has posted this गजल in My Blog. I liked his गजल and have made as a new Post. I am thankful to Anjan Ji and wish him all the best in future in writing Nepali गजल. I believe that he could make it even better had he tried little more and I hope that he certainly does his best on coming days. Since I like Nepali Poem(kabita) and Nepali (गजल), I will be posting here some more गजल when I have time. You can also send me your Poems and Nepali Gazals. Literature is such an interesting thing in Life and our Nepali literature is also very rich. Just We need to do is keep on Contributing to this field. नेपाली साहित्य, कबिता र गजल मन पराउने साथी हरुलाई तल को Anjan जि ले लेख्नु भएको गजल प्रस्तुत गरेको छु। तपाईं पनि यदी नेपाली गजल मन पराउनु हुन्छ भने यो ब्लग हेर्दैइ गर्नु होला। मेरो ब्लग मा पालिदिनु भएकोमा धेरै धेरै धन्यवाद।

सहि समयको लहर मा जन्मे
रिती रिवाज बंसज्को कहर मा जन्मे

मामाताको आचल भित्र लडी बुडी गर्दै
बनकुन्ज प्रकिर्तिको कहर मा जन्मे

डरलाग्दो निस्पट भयानक रातमा
दीन दुखी गरीबको कहर मा जन्मे

बेशी र फाट्को उपत्यका भित्र
दाङको तुल्शिपुर शहर मा जन्मे

मेरो विचारमा मलाई लाग्छ
बाबा आमा को मस्ती र रहर मा जन्मे

(Personally, I did not like this Gazal much and I think we can improve its standard. This is the last time, I am publishing someone’s Gazal in my blog without any review. I encourage you to submit your gazal but they will be scrutinised and only good gazals will be published henceforth.)

Nepali Gazal, kabita(नेपाली साहित्य, कबिता र गजल)

This is a Nepali गजल written by ANJAN BIBASH ACLO. I do not know him but He has posted this गजल in My Blog. I liked his गजल and have made as a new Post. I am thankful to Anjan Ji and wish him all the best in future in writing Nepali गजल. I believe that he could make it even better had he tried little more and I hope that he certainly does his best on coming days.

Since I like Nepali Poem(kabita) and Nepali (गजल), I will be posting here some more गजल when I have time. You can also send me your Poems and Nepali Gazals.

Literature is such an interesting thing in Life and our Nepali literature is also very rich. Just We need to do is keep on Contributing to this field.

नेपाली साहित्य, कबिता र गजल मन पराउने साथी हरुलाई तल को Anjan जि ले लेख्नु भएको गजल प्रस्तुत गरेको छु। तपाईं पनि यदी नेपाली गजल मन पराउनु हुन्छ भने यो ब्लग हेर्दैइ गर्नु होला। मेरो ब्लग मा पालिदिनु भएकोमा धेरै धेरै धन्यवाद।

समाज सग अयोग्य भै ठोकिन पुगे I

रिसको आवेगमा आँफै सग झोकिन्न पुगे II

जिबन जिउनु को औचित्य नै रहेन I

आफू आफू सगै एक्नास सग ठोक्किन पुगे II

मन भरी का चाहना अभिलाषा सगै I

होड बाजी मा अघी सर्ने म आँफै पहिला रोकिन पुगे II

मुग्लानिएर जवानी दासता मा ब्यतित हुँदा I

समय को पावन्दी मा आफ्फै ठोकिन पुगे II

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Nepali Gazal, kabita(नेपाली साहित्य, कबिता र गजल)

This is a Nepali Poem written by Sagar Bohora from Nepal. i do not know him but He has posted this poem in My Blog. I liked his poem and have made as a new Post. His address in Nepal is kanchanpur, Mahendra Nagar, Nepal. that is in Mahakali Anchal.I am thankful to Sagar Ji and wish him all the best in future in writing Nepali Poem.

Since I like Nepali Poem(kabita) and Nepali Gazals, I will be posting here some more Poems when I have time. You can also send me your Poems and Nepali Gazals.

Literature is such an interesting thing in Life and our Nepali literature is also very rich. Just We need to do is keep on Contributing to this field.

नेपाली साहित्य, कबिता र गजल मन पराउने साथी हरुलाई तल को सागर बोहोरा जि ले लेख्नु भएको कबिता प्रस्तुत गरेको छु। तपाईं पनि यदी नेपाली गजल मन पराउनु हुन्छ भने यो ब्लग हेर्दैइ गर्नु होला। मेरो ब्लग मा पालिदिनु भएकोमा धेरै धेरै धन्यवाद।

 

नखोज्नु है मलाई बसन्त ऋतुको हरियालीमा

म त उजाड मरुभुमिमा हर्राई सकेछु

नसम्झिनु है मलाई कुनै खुशियालीमा

म त दुःख र आँशुको सागरमा पो डुबि सकेछु

नखोज्नु है मलाई पूर्णिमाको जुनेली रातमा

म त ५५ डिग्रीको घाममा जल्न पुगेछु

नखोज्नु है मलाई हजारौं दुनियाँको भिडमा

म त बालुवै बालुवाको मरुभुमी मा पुगी सकेछु

नखोज्नु है मलाई बिहानीको सुस्तरी पवनमा

म त समुन्द्री आँधिमा बडारीन पो पुगी सकेछु

नखोज्नु है मलाई वरपिपलको छहारीमा

म त रुखै नभएको मरुभुमीमा पो मडारिन पुगी सकेछु

नखोज्नु है मलाई जन्मभुमिको कुना कुनामा

म त गाउँ घर छाडी समुन्द्र तरी पराइ बनि सकेछु

नखोज्नु है मलाई पहिलाको गाउँ घरको ठेगानामा

म त अब परदेशी पो भैसकेछु, परदेशी पो भैसकेछु

सागर बोहरा

महेंन्द्रनगर, नेपाल @ कंचनपुर

A Nepali Gazal-Just a try.

If you are reading my blog for quite a long time, You know that how happy I could be if I write or read Gazal in Nepali. I love my language, literature and specially Gazals written in Nepali Language. It’s not my first attempt to write Post in Nepali. Continue reading “A Nepali Gazal-Just a try.”